Would the story benefit from exploring how the school community reacts to her dance talent, or should the narrative follow their walk home as they discuss their future aspirations after graduation?
When the track ended, Maya gave a thumbs-up. "That was your best take yet. The lighting from the window really caught the footwork."
Would the story benefit from exploring how the school community reacts to her dance talent, or should the narrative follow their walk home as they discuss their future aspirations after graduation?
When the track ended, Maya gave a thumbs-up. "That was your best take yet. The lighting from the window really caught the footwork."